Once upon a time …in My Dreams September 14, 2007
Posted by sauvik in Dreams, poetry.trackback
As whispers merge into the twilight…
I kiss the dying sun,
Hoping the dawn
To be eternal and bright
I missed you in my dreams.
I have taken grief, in the everyday…
I have fought,
The burning midnight
But I was the heel of Achilles
I missed you in my dreams.
As I romanced the moon and the black …
I have betrayed,
The thirst of this illusion
I refused to drink the darkness
I missed you in my dreams.
I never saw the way to this maze…
Every door I crept on to,
Was a mirage
It wasn’t my destiny
I missed you in my dreams.
You were never meant for me…
It was I, who loved you,
Some people,
Are destined to be the sea
I missed you in my dreams.
It was always summer…
But it rained,
Like never before
I will miss your face, your voice, your smile,
I missed you in the twinkle of my dreams.
You know
who you are, and you're pretty darn comfortable
with yourself.Like everyone, you struggle with
the parts of yourself that aren't so great...But
you're good at accepting who you are and not
dwelling on your faults. As a result, you're confident,
optimistic, and very real.
Hey Sauvik,
I didn’t get this line.
“Some people,
Are destined to be the sea.”
And also, who is “you” in the poem? Is it darkness or a person?
A very thoughtful poem Sauvik. Write on!
Hey Sauvik, where have you disappeared?
Beautiful! I love the flow, the simplicity and the emotion that you have expressed so wonderfully.
hey shruti,
i have been very very busy .. since last one month or so…joined tcs.. and in trivandrum for the training part .. of 2 months … havent blogged since then.. wazzup with ye… ?
Ah, I thought you had lost interest in blogging.
Great news about tcs!
hey …shruti …. how can ye say that … ME have LOST interest in blogging .. its my mental escape to happiness…. its not just abt writing …. but there are many many many constraints right now… i have some 10 things written down in my diary all ready to be typed down and posted … but … i am time strapped ..btw ..how are ye … hey u can mail me i have updated my mail a/c in this blog page ..
yeah, disappear again and I will.